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They opened the door, to what was pressumed to be the new and better world.
The sun, it was gone.
And the flowers had all wilted...
but there was a promise, a hope..that things would be renewed.
A group together, like an ancient band of druids through the woods and the sea, traveling hand in hand.
The limbs on the trees, they bled for them.
And the clouds from the sky...
they cried for them.
For all the hope in the world, was left here within this group.
All the sunshine was stored in their eyes,
and all the heavenly scenes of the saints and angels,
were caught up in their minds.
They pushed the rainforest aside,
and they stepped gingerly onto the brown, withered grass.
Raising their eyes, to the sky of grey,
their voices rang with hope, and their imaginations,
they screamed for reality.
And somewhere in the twilight, it began to rain.
©2004-2009 ~timrkey
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It's a resubmission. cleaned it up a bit, grammar etc.

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i dont ge tit. but it sounds pretty. and druids are fun. and im sure when i am less codined ill appreciate this

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"Gnaw.Gnawy gnaw gnaw...I HAVE SMOOTH THUMBS...and barbies for everyone!"
That is very very pretty.... good imagery. Lovely work darling.

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Sometimes I wake up crying late at night and sometimes I scream out your name.
i like it, exspecially the last line about rain. very awesomee

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Is this the chance when we fly away?
this is really good. i love it. reminds me of lord of the flies kinda

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and as the summer's ending,
the cool air will put your hard heart away.
you were so condescending...
and this is all that's left:

scraping paper to document.
i've packed a change of clothes and it's time to move on.
-d e a t h CAB
Wow, that's great. Says a lot.

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(x(.:.Depressed-Angel.:.)x)

::How can I take your hand when you can't promise happy endings?*//
_Amber Pacific_
ah emily! this is so good!

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"doesn't everything die at last, and too soon?
tell me, what is it you plan to do
with your one wild and precious life?"
i love it,it's a kind of picture that make me feel good,it's sweet and sensual...
sorry for my bad english...never mind i give you my :+fav:
:hug:

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xxx

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